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A Smaller Portion

Written by Elias Vance · edited, narrated, and reviewed
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The kitchen scale read 6:04 in green digits and 18.4 kilograms beneath Mateo’s bare feet. Delia wrote the number on a sticky note and pressed it to the cabinet door above the toaster. The note joined seventeen others in a crooked column, each one dated, each one showing a gain of forty to ninety grams. She lifted him off the scale and set him on the counter, where he sat with his legs dangling, his heels tapping the lower cabinet in a rhythm that made the spice rack tremble.

“Good,” she said. “Up again.”

Mateo nodded without looking at her. His attention stayed on the measuring cup she filled at the sink, watching the water climb to the 180-milliliter line. She added three scoops of the elemental formula, screwed on the lid, shook it until the powder dissolved. The liquid turned the color of weak tea. She poured it into a bottle and set the bottle in the warmer.

“Stool was yesterday,” she said. “I need to check today.”

“It’s not time yet,” Mateo said.

“After breakfast. You know the routine.”

She opened the memo book beside the warmer and wrote the date, the weight, the intake from the night before. The book was spiral-bound, blue, the kind nurses carried before tablets replaced everything. She had kept one since her first year on the surgical recovery floor. Patients’ numbers, wound output, urine color, the small measurements that told you whether a body was turning toward healing or away from it. The book had columns now: intake, output, weight, stool color, notes. The notes column stayed empty most days. She had learned not to write down what she could not verify.

The phone rang while she was warming the bottle. She let it ring twice, then answered.

“Ms. Ocampo? This is Rachel from county social services. I’m calling about your brother’s estate.”

Delia turned her back to Mateo and lowered her voice. “Luis has been dead for two years.”

“I know. I’m sorry. There’s a storage unit in his name that just came up in a delinquency notice. The property manager ran the file and found you as the next of kin. We’re required to notify.”

“What’s in it?”

“We don’t have an inventory. You’d need to contact the facility directly. I can email you the paperwork.”

Delia pressed the phone between her ear and shoulder and stirred the formula with a long spoon. The warmer beeped. She turned it off.

“Send it,” she said. “I’ll handle it.”

“I’m sorry for your loss,” Rachel said, and hung up.

Delia put the phone on the counter and stood for a moment with her hand on the warmer. Luis had been eleven when she last saw him. She was sixteen, and the foster system had already separated them twice. The county had not allowed her to attend his funeral. She found out from a form letter. The storage unit would be full of whatever the state had not thrown away: a mattress, maybe, or a box of clothes, or nothing at all. She did not want to think about it. She had a child to feed.

She lifted Mateo from the counter and carried him to the table. He was light for six, lighter than the charts said he should be. The surgeon had removed forty-one centimeters of his small bowel in March. Since then, every gram mattered. She sat him in the booster seat and handed him the bottle. He took it with both hands and began to drink, his cheeks working in a steady pull.

Delia knelt beside him to check his abdomen. The incision had healed to a pink line that curved around his navel like a hook. She pressed two fingers below the scar, feeling for distention, for the firmness that meant gas or blockage. His belly was soft. She leaned closer, her ear near his ribs.

That was when she heard it. A low suck-suck, two beats, like a straw pulling at the bottom of a cup. It came from under his left rib, just below the line of the scar. She held her breath and listened. The sound repeated, faint and rhythmic, timed to the swallow in his throat.

She pulled back. “Little engine,” she said. “Your stomach’s working.”

Mateo looked at her over the bottle. “It always does that.”

“Does it hurt?”

He shook his head and kept drinking.

Delia stayed on her knees beside the chair. The sound did not come again. She told herself it was peristalsis, the normal churn of the gut moving formula through the new connection. The surgeon had warned her that the anastomosis could be noisy at first. Air pockets, fluid shifts, the bowel learning its new length. Nothing to write down. She did not write it down.

But she

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